BMW 530 Schnitzer

[Tidals]

Hello Guys
I´m new on this board. My English is not the best, srry!
This car is my second i´ve modled. Now its time to revise
I would be pleasure about C&C´s

Greetz Tim


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[teeworks.]

nice so far! ... but it has kinda strange refelctions?! ...looks like it got crashed , dented body (especialy the back sight). i think the problem is, that you have partly too much polys and that those are not flatened ...therefor there are those "ripples" all over there ...is a lil bit of work, i now ...but all in all you got the proportions of the car very well!

ah, another one thing, the bunch grill is to high... look at the ref.pics! (german: nierengrill)

greets!
Tee

[Tidals]

Thnx Tee for your coment
There are some mistakes in the mesh, I know *g* And now I will be better!
This site were the refernzen I´ve had.
referenzpix

Greetz
Tim

[teeworks.]

perhaps you can post a mesh, to see whats wrong? or is it too embarrassing?

...no, seriously, like u can see in your ref.pic, the shape of the grill is rounder adapted to the hood than yours is. u know what i mean?

[Tidals]

Well, I´ve look the mesh and it is totaly trash :banghead: More than I thought! Look Like it runs

[LG.]

very nice.. man.. post some wires.. maybe we can find some errors..

the region near of the door handlers looks weird.. ins't?

no crits about the render.. i like it