Domino's rendering thread

[Domino]

here are finished renders
need som critics

and for last picture, how i should Crop the image? Or, do i need some effects? that mercedes image looks like "nothing special" (if you know what i mean)

[Helicase]

pic 1) I don't like it because it doesn't have any ground plane, 2/3) imo these are few minor things to touch up in PS, 4) Very cool!

[Domino]

1-there is ground plane, but its too dark ro see it, what should i do to make it "visible" ?
2-the sharp line is sharp shadow from point light, yes it is strange, my bad
mesh is MultiRes "modifiered" so it looks how it looks, need more work

4-thanks

[Helicase]

1) Change the diffuse to a lighter color, that is what I usually do when the ground plane is too dark, that should keep the lighting the same and not screw up anything else.
2) Little stuff like that happens all the time, i think it looks amazing, it just needs a little Photoshop work , use the blur tool, be careful though not to overdo it, and marquee tool it up if you need too with a small feather on it. Hell google image image search photoshop and look at what they did the kim kardashian lol

I am not a professional artist, This is just what has worked for me in the past.

Lately, i have been dealing with nurbs, so i have been getting no surface blemishes at all :P

[Domino]

thanks man, i will definitively try it out
and what about cropping? here are my suggestion (1 and 2 are with "lens effect")

[mynameisoscarjo]

I like the first one best A suggestion would be to add some spotlights or something into the ceiling to make the grey more exciting.

KIU

[DaveCox]

That lens affect looks shit. Sorry but it does

Nice looking render I don't think you need to crop it to be honest. Looks good as is. Just ramp up the settings and spend some time in post. (Without cheap lens effects).

[Qualt]

I really like the dodge viper renders the materials are excellent, you have to tweak some tiny details and it would be like a photo. Some ones have been pointed out by Helicase. And check the back window, it has a light blue-white gradient, like from a sky I don't know if you wanted to show that but I would use a grayscale gradient. Really nice work on there
About the Mercedes I think that something looks strange about the size. Like the room is small... or the tile of the floor... maybe is the wideangle lens effect or don't know. I would try a shot like the car near a window... like it would be watching outside

Keep working!!!

P.S.: The lens effect is ok but check some real photos and use them as reference to get a more realistic one ...

Regards, saludos
Qualt

[Domino]

ok, here are repaired renders hope better

[Qualt]

Amazing...
just the first one have little parts in violet... but in photoshop is just a touch

Regards, saludos
Qualt

[Rengen_3d]

i like you mercedes, very nice. 1or4

[TnB]

looks nice the first one,really nice ,but dude you seem to have a AA problem on your every render ,looks bad ,what fiter do you use ,and how many samples?

[Helicase]

looks nice the first one,really nice ,but dude you seem to have a AA problem on your every render ,looks bad ,what fiter do you use ,and how many samples?

IMO i disagree, It looks good, but it is not 100%, the AA issues make it like 99%. Keep up the good work Domino!

[TnB]

what? just look at the wheels)

[mynameisoscarjo]

I agree with TnB. Try rendering it at the double size with lower AA settings, and resize it in PS or your software of choice.