Opel Astra G Coupe

[dread_darven]

First time i post here, been posting wips at cgtalk and smcars before.
Been working on this Astra G a few weeks on and off.
Hope to get some C&C as i still noticed some bumps and flaws after these renders .






Greetz

[Ravens]

nice work, can we have a clay? and make a GTC kit for it :buttrock:

[andrei]

hey ravens, there are 2 clays above the wires...

good model friend...

some things to improve your work:

-the region between the headlight hole and the grille hole, is a bit too square, try to roud it a little bit...

-look at the rear mudguard, there are bumps above it..

I thnk that the hard lines of this cars isn´t so hard this way, try to give them a round aspect, but in a small chamfer....


bye, keep it up

[graffb]

Great start!

[Ravens]

@andrei, sorry i meant a shot from 3dmax..

[andrei]

ihih, sorry ravens ^^

[S W I P S]

nice , for few second i thouth it was nurbs because the modelling is really accurate and clean!!! keep us updated !

[dread_darven]

Thanks for the comment's

@ Ravens ; You mean the Opc kit?, cause Gtc is only for the newer version i thought.

@ Andrei ; Did those things you mentioned, thanks for pointing these out :buttrock: .
Especially the hard lines didn't catch me at first, but some where indeed to hard (maybe some still are :P ) .

@ Swips ; Nurbs ?? that is good to hear, :buttrock: Thanks m8. btw, i was thinking of beginning with Rhinoin the near future .

Made some progress by cleaning the mesh and redoing some lines, also made the sideskirt and front diffuser (or something :P ) . Next are the rims, haven't decided to go for made up rims, import or the original.







And it this what you meant Ravens?


Greetz

[andrei]

whoa, great!

there are bumps yet above the mudguard...

bye

[Ravens]

woow nice work...!

well opc kit then

[EquiNOX]

Very clean... keep on working

[dread_darven]

Thanks for the reply's

whoa, great!

there are bumps yet above the mudguard...

bye

Fixed those finally .

@ Ravens ; if i will model a bodykit it will be the same one that i will put on my Astra G irl , (will be hapenning in the coming weeks )
http://www.albstadt-net.de/lumma/Ope..._lpc-r_cc.html

I fixed some more things and made the rims. I also made 2 test material renders and after these i saw some more bumps which i fixed (the one at the door handle and the one Andrei was mentioning) So the last clay is the most recent after all changes. As a side note ; the rims used in the studio shoot render where from another model just used as dummy on this one (it was a seat :o: )






Greetz

[alansc]

nice choice

looks good

[andrei]

cool

i think the rim spokes are too thin to stand a car above it..

bye

[cenkkara]

very good modeling!keep it up!