novitec FERRARI F430

[wandrinsheep]

hi guys i'm rather new here, and i am working on a animation for self indulgnece, i want a very high quality animation, and im goin to make parts of the animation in toon as well, it involes two cars the ferrari f430 , and an aston martin vantage(hamann) this is the work ive done so far on the ferrari pls comment and crit, i need accurate models, but pls keep in mind that, i am aimin to capture as much detail in as little polies as possible, so cant go overboard :P thanks again,

[DaveCox]

Nice start - may we see some wires please?

[mtumer]

Cool start wandrinsheep, seems to be bumpless modeling. But agree with Dave...Wires and no smooth please.

[wandrinsheep]

lol ok as requested here r the wires i have so far, ill be doin as much as i can tommorro,, finally a day off from college anyways pls crit an comment

[DaveCox]

looks alright to me!

[Duron]

i dont like the cuts.. gaps are not smooth..

beside that, it looks not bad, keep working

[wandrinsheep]

thnks dave , i also agree with duron my cuts are not clean, im goin to smoothen that issue out asap, dont want to be moving too fast... again u guys thnks for the input

[wandrinsheep]

hey guys small update here, still in the rough stages, ive attempted to make the cuts at the front better, i havnt fully cleaned up the lines on the side pls comment an crit nontheless

[wandrinsheep]

another small update bfore bed pls crit thnks

[SvdM]

The panel-gap between the rear of the door and the rear flank seems to be bigger at the body's shoulder and too small at the bottom. I don't have a picture of the Novitec, so I don't know if this really happens, but I doubt it. Panel-gaps nowadays are in the region of 3mm nowadays.

[ravenzep]

In europe. Not south america....LOL

[Pan3sar]

There's a few mistakes, also could you show a front view so we can see the shape of the vents, looks wrong but the angle is awkward.

Crits, and refs used, attached.

[kriscabrera]

hehe funny seeing that 360 forged picture, thats a freind of mine, looks alright to me just fix those comments from Pan3sar and your golden

[wandrinsheep]

just got in from skool, sir Pan3sar the crits from u were exactly wat i was looking for many thanks ill be on it rite away and bring updates shortly, again thanks for commenting an showing interest in my work guys

[wandrinsheep]

well here comes the first set of corrections, thanks to Pan3sar for pointing out all my flaws in this work, it was well appreciated with an eye for detail ive made all suggested changes mentioned so far on the front only, indeed my vents were really messed up both in their position and flow thanks and, here are the updates ive made, pls comment an crit them every1 i hope thy are an improvement to my first work, pics are extra big for any detail i may have missed thanks in advance

EDIT: the final for the night, made the door cuts smaller, made more even distribution so cuts are even an adjusted the rear scoop, and thee tangent line along the wheel/door