Sls gullwing wip

[GtbFiorano]

My Work In Progress of my latest car. Modeling in 3DS Max and future rendering undecided. Critiques are welcome from you guys as I can get some tips from people in this field. The link is attached to my blog with images attached.

follow here : http://www.felimedia.net/posts

[3davt]

its a nice start

[GtbFiorano]

Thnx for the reply, from here I will see where the finish brings me.

[GtbFiorano]

just added some minor pieces to the car check it out. www.felimedia.net/posts

[mynameisoscarjo]

Would have been easier if you uploaded pics here.

[GtbFiorano]

@mynameisoscarjo Definitely will on next post, sorry it's real easy for me in word press. But for this since I have more to show i won't flood my page anymore and just add more here.

[GtbFiorano]

benz_with_rims.jpg
Much of this weekend i took off this project, but today just added rims ( decided to go with amg's 10 spoke) and front grille was added previously. Now on to tire modeling.... Real fun

[GtbFiorano]

rimntire.jpg

[3davt]

the tire looks odd

[tom120934]

You need to smooth your model on many places. The rear end of the door is bumpy, the upper corner of the main air intake is pinched, there is another bump on front fender, just behind the top of the wheel arch.

A good exercise for you would be to autocritic the last picture you posted. Try to highlight all the fixes your surfaces need, and post them here : it will be more useful for you than we just hightlight them for you. But don't worry I do it if you need it

[GtbFiorano]

Thanks for the replies. I need to hear the flaws to point out and fix. Thanks @ 3davt , I need to add some more topology to the tire. What you saw there was a smoothing group added to the wall of the tire and not the treads. Looks off on my behalf as well. And thanks @ tom120934 for your specifics. I have circled what i believe you have stated. But go ahead and circle your own if i have missed anything. circled_problems.jpgcircled_problems2.jpgair_scoop_pointout.jpg


Oh by the way I feel privileged to have you critique my work mr.tom120934 ! Thanks for the feedback from everyone

[GtbFiorano]

long time i haven't added a work in progress, but here i am with some more screen shots. Ive been trying to do as much of this on my spare time. benz_5411.jpgbenz_interior_5411.jpg The interior won't be exactly 100% to exact, but the way i have it is good for rendering exterior shots with something to show an interior. Still adding pieces to it, definitely not done. Comments and critiques are good. My goal is to wire the door for open and close animations in 3ds max so i have to model the piston that lifts door open.

[P2sta]

man the body looks not good, there are bumpy areas all over... you should slow down and fix them first

[GtbFiorano]

thanks for the reply i must fix these bumpy areas, you're right. Jumping ahead of myself.

[kriscabrera]

yea agree with P2sta slow down and focus on the little issues before moving on