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Old 31-03-08, 10:35 PM   #1
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OK this is my 2nd high poly car and first proper attempt using Vray. I'm fairly pleased with it so I don't know if I'llmake any changes to it unless it's really obvious it's wrong. I will probably change the materials a bit, and mybe try so make new scenes to put it in. Anyway C&C welcome.
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Old Yesterday, 02:42 AM   #2
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Looks great so far but I found a few issues!

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Sorry I compressed the image a little to much but hopefully u can make it out enough to see the problems.
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Old Yesterday, 08:33 AM   #3
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Looks great so far but I found a few issues!

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Sorry I compressed the image a little to much but hopefully u can make it out enough to see the problems.

Thanks I'll have a look.
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Old Yesterday, 08:45 AM   #4
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hello there...
i can see some chamfering problems, or some meshe flow exactly.
the car looks melted. your next car should be perfect, so be carefull with modeling.
renders can be improoved. actually, now, them look like some tests.
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Your modeling and rendering skills needs to be improved. Show us some hi-res clay renders and wires - so we can give you some advices about model. Also check out some tutorials about studio rendering. You can find some of them in this site.
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