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03-02-08, 11:22 AM | #72 |
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Hi there, first I want to say thank you for your comments, they're help me alot.
@P2sta:yeah, you're right, I'll check,thanks. @evolutionn: I understand what do you want to show me, the blueprint is not enough, and my camera 's position wasn't the same, thank you for your photo, I fixed some parts, take a look ok . @sm@rt: Maybe you're right, but in some studios, car's glass like that, you can search some photo in gallery's R8. I've just tried make my car's glass like that, and some 1 reason, I don't wanna show the interior now, these are exterior renders, thanks guy. @zylak: thank you so much about your comment, I didn't see this fault before, and I fixed it. And these are 2 lastest images, need your comment guys . The back rear and interior render will update soon.
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03-02-08, 08:59 PM | #73 |
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You said you had finished modelling, so probably you aren't going to like this, but check the areas I marked.
1) The pillar profile should be more rounded. 2) That corner isn't really straight. 3) There is a certain concavity in the curve that defines the wheel arch, and it makes it kind of stick out. I don't think it should. 4) The wheel arch seems to widen in this area. 5) I get the impression those edges shouldn't be that soft. You could try a harsher chamfer. Yes, it is nitpicking, but considering how good your model already is, I can't help it. You have to get it perfect!
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12-02-08, 08:34 PM | #75 |
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It's wonderful work!!!!
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25-02-08, 02:10 PM | #76 |
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great render and model
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25-02-08, 06:07 PM | #77 |
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i love it so much, exspecialy last render
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