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Old 30-08-06, 12:25 PM   #51
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hey flam00, i like it!
..try to get some more straight shape into the outer sides of the frontbumper, looks a little undefined, if you know what i'm thinking about? (the grille inside of it looks also a lil warped). Also take a look at your b-pillars, are somehow too round at the upper side (in my opinion )

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Old 30-08-06, 03:38 PM   #52
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looks good, just a few things. Your grille mesh looks a bit weird, you need to add some depth (extrude edges back or wtv....) also the last render is messed up because the light/shadows, make it impossible to see most of the front details.

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Old 30-08-06, 03:47 PM   #53
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wooooooohooooooooo dude...nice progress I like it very much...
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Old 02-09-06, 06:12 AM   #54
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Men try this Only to view how the car see

You have a line in the hood (The big RED Arrow) that indicates that the hood is finish there... But you have the below part with carbon fiber too... thats look odd. Can you paint that part like the entire car?? Or the other is erase that line and make the hood complete even to the Grill , thats my suggest.
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Old 02-09-06, 06:53 AM   #55
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wow, i like the studio render
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Old 02-09-06, 08:51 AM   #56
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looks really cool
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