Aston Martin Vantage

[T.P.]

Started a new project , this is my 3th car , so here is the first pics
Crits are welcome ( i am trying to learn my best to get better, so every kind of crit you have feel free )

[T.P.]

and here is some more .. unsmooth

[rahul_j]

great wires, lovely work man


regds

[mr.K]

im not sure that i can say the same as rahul.

I think u got way to many edges at some places. i have marked them out. u dont need that many edges there it will only make the model heavyer than it needs to be, and its easier to get a nice and smooth mesh when vertexes are further away from each other. thou its pretty nice for being your third car so keep it up.

(tip) if u are using max 8 u can select the edges u want to delete and hold in ctrl and press delete. then it will delete the vertexes on those edges too.

[X-Ice]

heyyyy, it's better than your slk

Can u show us clay renders?

[T.P.]

10x guys
raul_j :10x man its allways nice to hear that , but i think i have some mistakes there .
mr.K :yaeh i think your right , i'll try to fix that it is giving me trouble i just wanted a sharp edge but i guess it is too much , and i am learning max now ,but this car is made in cinema4d because i am still unexperienced in max and honestly i like cinema better
x-ice :surely hope so its better
i will send clay render soon i still have some inaccuracies in the front and i want to take this project slow and accurate as i can

[T.P.]

Heres the clayrender , changed the wires a little but sorry mr.K tried everything but could not reduce the edges , doesnt just doesnt work
anyway here it is , tear me apart with ur crits ...

[X-Ice]

good so far, I attach an image... I hope I can help you. I think... hmm take more time for your projekt and work cleaner on the ends of the parts. hehe I hope you understand me because my english

[Flam00]

Yo T.P., nice work, but like the other's say's, take more time for this project...

bye...

[T.P.]

Got u guys ,
x-ice: 10x man i'll try to work on those edges and work cleaner
flam: no prob ill take all the time in the world ( hope it will do )
,i dont progress until crits says its perfect
oh well back to work...