First time i post here, been posting wips at cgtalk and smcars before.
Been working on this Astra G a few weeks on and off.
Hope to get some C&C as i still noticed some bumps and flaws after these renders .






Greetz

nice work, can we have a clay? and make a GTC kit for it

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hey ravens, there are 2 clays above the wires...

good model friend...

some things to improve your work:

-the region between the headlight hole and the grille hole, is a bit too square, try to roud it a little bit...

-look at the rear mudguard, there are bumps above it..

I thnk that the hard lines of this cars isn´t so hard this way, try to give them a round aspect, but in a small chamfer....


bye, keep it up

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Great start!

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Concept
Opel Manta B



My english is not perfect
3dsmax + Vray

@andrei, sorry i meant a shot from 3dmax..

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ihih, sorry ravens ^^

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nice , for few second i thouth it was nurbs because the modelling is really accurate and clean!!! keep us updated !

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Thanks for the comment's

@ Ravens ; You mean the Opc kit?, cause Gtc is only for the newer version i thought.

@ Andrei ; Did those things you mentioned, thanks for pointing these out .
Especially the hard lines didn't catch me at first, but some where indeed to hard (maybe some still are :P ) .

@ Swips ; Nurbs ?? that is good to hear, Thanks m8. btw, i was thinking of beginning with Rhinoin the near future .

Made some progress by cleaning the mesh and redoing some lines, also made the sideskirt and front diffuser (or something :P ) . Next are the rims, haven't decided to go for made up rims, import or the original.







And it this what you meant Ravens?


Greetz

whoa, great!

there are bumps yet above the mudguard...

bye

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