Aston Martin Vantage

[T.P.]

Started a new project , this is my 3th car , so here is the first pics
Crits are welcome ( i am trying to learn my best to get better, so every kind of crit you have feel free )

[T.P.]

and here is some more .. unsmooth

[rahul_j]

great wires, lovely work man


regds

[mr.K]

im not sure that i can say the same as rahul.

I think u got way to many edges at some places. i have marked them out. u dont need that many edges there it will only make the model heavyer than it needs to be, and its easier to get a nice and smooth mesh when vertexes are further away from each other. thou its pretty nice for being your third car so keep it up.

(tip) if u are using max 8 u can select the edges u want to delete and hold in ctrl and press delete. then it will delete the vertexes on those edges too.

[X-Ice]

heyyyy, it's better than your slk

Can u show us clay renders?

[T.P.]

10x guys
raul_j :10x man its allways nice to hear that , but i think i have some mistakes there .
mr.K :yaeh i think your right , i'll try to fix that it is giving me trouble i just wanted a sharp edge but i guess it is too much , and i am learning max now ,but this car is made in cinema4d because i am still unexperienced in max and honestly i like cinema better :clown:
x-ice :surely hope so its better
i will send clay render soon i still have some inaccuracies in the front and i want to take this project slow and accurate as i can

[T.P.]

Heres the clayrender , changed the wires a little but sorry mr.K tried everything but could not reduce the edges , doesnt just doesnt work
anyway here it is , tear me apart with ur crits ...

[X-Ice]

good so far, I attach an image... I hope I can help you. I think... hmm take more time for your projekt and work cleaner on the ends of the parts. hehe I hope you understand me because my english

[Flam00]

Yo T.P., nice work, but like the other's say's, take more time for this project...

bye...

[T.P.]

Got u guys ,
x-ice: 10x man i'll try to work on those edges and work cleaner
flam: no prob ill take all the time in the world ( hope it will do :clown: )
,i dont progress until crits says its perfect
oh well back to work... :chinese:

[T.P.]

well i am back working on this car , still having allot of difficulties with the edges ( if anyone got a good techniqe plz share )
here is a little progress

[Muktinsh]

color looks fine!
Keep it up

[jurk_boy]

ya


looks good to me


try to use the black color instead of that one

good luck

[The Rain Knight]

plz show your mesh cos it's surely messy seeing the distortions you have here and there on your render.

[TTL3d]

Yeah we need a wireframe to see if your edges match just right...and to see what you need to fix in ur model...

Your edges and stuff need another chamfer to make them more squared opposed to rounded.

Peace!