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Old 22-03-08, 03:44 PM   #1
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Mercedes-Benz SLK (R171)

Hi evryone! I like mercedes cars very much. I think, that it's cars are one of the reference in auto's design. The new MB SLK (r171) is not an exclusion. I liked the design of that car very much, so i decided to create it. I am planing the complete interior and detailed exterior, hope you will help me!
So, i have just started, and here are the first renders:



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Old 22-03-08, 04:05 PM   #2
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It looks like a good start, but try to make wire more equal Wire in the center of the bumper a bit dense
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Old 22-03-08, 04:11 PM   #3
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thank you smart. I am still working on it
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Old 22-03-08, 04:13 PM   #4
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hi man, have some crits for you, there is lots of unaccurate places, some modeling problems,... marked green, the yellow marked lines are too sharp imo, but not bad start at all keep working
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Old 22-03-08, 04:20 PM   #5
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thx p2sta, but with some critics i dont agree.


red - these are right shapes, but i will fix the a bit

green - i agree with you, and i will fix them
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Old 22-03-08, 04:24 PM   #6
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thx p2sta, but with some critics i dont agree.

red - these are right shapes, but i will fix the a bit

green - i agree with you, and i will fix them
I don't think there are wrong, I think some of them have some bumps or are not "clean" IMO, keep it up
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Old 23-03-08, 11:26 AM   #7
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Here is an update, there is no chamfer in some places, but i'll fix it soon

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It looks not bad. Please make hi-res clay renders with ScanLine render next time
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Thx, smart.
So, here is an update again, i've fixed the front side, and rendered grey-mat in scanline

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