【Minicooper S】

[ALEE]

The first grant in the works here, I am glad to share with you！
My poor English, we hope that more exhibitions.
Thanks

No use of GI.
Modeled by Rhino 3D.
Rendered by Cinema 4D.

[instinct-vfx]

Overall rather nice, there's quite harsh inaccuracies tho (at least if it is meant to be a stock S), lemme know if you want some pointers

Regards,
Thorsten

[ALEE]

instince-vfx,Thank you for the evaluation. The first image I use exaggerated model, the second is to use synthetic technology background. I would like to hear your views in more detail on my work

[dbKenn]

Checkout the the reflections in the car door and the reflection in the MINI car door. From my view its looks good but the reflections don't match. The lighting looks great.

[instinct-vfx]

Okay, first off i know that car pretty inside out as i've been working on Mini's a lot. (CAD Data, so that's not a fair comparison, but still :P ) The numbers refer to the numbers in the overpaint i did. hope you dont mind (see attachment)

1. To sharp. The corner is a lot rounder
2. Both the Lamps and the Lower Grill have a completely different Shape. It looks like you have sone a JC Works edition. still it is off.
3. Both the Profile of the Sidebumpers and the surrounding metal part is pretty off. The Bumper is convex not concave actually. and the Part next to it doesnt really pick up the curvature.
4. The chromeline along the window is not waving up and down. it's one big curve.
5. The Roof is a lot too curved. the profile is rather like 6. in the overpaint (exaggerated of course)
7. The sideindicators shape is off. it looks to sharp on the corners as well as a little undefined(the rear end follows the curvature of the orange part). And the CooperS comes with white side indicators by default. Yellow side indicators are not available for the cooperS
8. The inlet isnt that curved. You got dome kind of bump there.The inlet's "bottom" is going up rather straight then curved. Besides there is no Frame around it. It's all one part (besides the Grill inside.
9. The sidebumpers are a strange mix of the standard bumpers and the JC Works bumpers. The JC works bumpers have an additional shape at the back, where as the standard ones are rather symmetrical (fron vs. back)
10. The roof railing isnt stepping out that much
11. The mirrors look too big, but that might be just the perspective.
12. The lower Frontbumper looks off too. It is definately the JC Works edition, but it is still off.
13. Those additional side-reflectors are US Version specific. And they are not that wide.

Just some stuff that popped to my eyes.

Regards,
Thorsten

[ALEE]

Thanks in the building friend
instinct-vfx,You let me really realize some mistakes, I many needed to studyto you, continued to try hard~~Moo~~~

[cuongnet]

you can only use google apps for email. so you can't use it for subdomains.
and google tells you how to set it up depending on your hoster.

[P2sta]

Originally Posted by cuongnet

you can only use google apps for email. so you can't use it for subdomains.
and google tells you how to set it up depending on your hoster.

man, please when you write to some thread check last posts dates, this thread is old and it is finished work, so please don't dig it up