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Old 24-01-08, 05:39 PM   #1
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Dodge Viper studio render vray

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I am sending this car for commentaries and sugestions.
I need to do more details.

3DSMax 8 and v-ray 1.5 R3 and post production Photoshop CS3

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Old 24-01-08, 05:54 PM   #2
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Can you show us some clay renders and wires of your model. It seems like your Viper has some bumps...
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Old 24-01-08, 09:39 PM   #3
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the studio render looks great but the model sm@rt said has some bumps and also the bolts on the rim poke out too much
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Old 25-01-08, 07:05 AM   #4
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I can only agree, render looks good, but modeling has some mistakes
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Old 28-01-08, 10:25 AM   #5
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Thanks everybody, for commentaries. I am fixing the mistakes.
Soon, I will send news pictures and wires.

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Old 28-01-08, 12:29 PM   #6
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Dodge Viper studio render vray

Hi!
I am sending some wire.
Why does happen it im my render wheel. When I render wheel in close the
bumpy is good, but the far distance I dont see the bump.
Other question, I dont fix the mistakes! I look, look, look, and I dont it.
What Do I do?
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Old 28-01-08, 01:03 PM   #7
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the bump map is small. it's easier to spot up close. if you're rendering with low settings the bump map can get lost in a bit of grainyness.

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Old 28-01-08, 01:17 PM   #8
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I have marked some places that contains bumps IMO. But I'm not sure about bumps. So post some clay renders.
Otherwise I like studio setup. Keep up good work!
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Old 28-01-08, 01:55 PM   #9
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Agreed with previous posts on the bumps. But nice renders anyway, the silver / blue one especially looks pretty realistic.
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Old 28-01-08, 02:51 PM   #10
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Thanks Sm@rt for your help!
Here is some clay renders and wires. Is it?
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