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Old 25-07-08, 07:56 PM   #1
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hey what good guys been away for a while, heres a model by eric mattison one of my buddies he goes by a tonne of names on different forums, the tires are modeled by exidge @ sektor-41. So taking a break from the cl i dont want to make any renders of that until the interior is done and those bumps are fixed on it. Crits and comments are welcome. the renders are in order from oldest to newest.
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Old 25-07-08, 08:21 PM   #2
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nice, you already know my crits on this!
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Old 26-07-08, 12:53 AM   #3
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Last one is the better imo.
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Old 26-07-08, 01:39 AM   #4
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they're all pretty good. on the second to last pic the reflections could flow better from the hood to bumper. the last one is nice but the mapping on the enviro is too repetitive.

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Old 26-07-08, 06:12 AM   #5
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Nice renders!!!

I think the texture size of the Carbon fiber could be smaller, looks quite big right now.

Nice stuff!
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Old 27-07-08, 07:05 PM   #6
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thanks for the inputs i will work on the materials and rendering some more.
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Old 27-07-08, 10:33 PM   #7
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your studio renders are really good...
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Old 27-07-08, 10:37 PM   #8
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good renders, I like the last one, only materials need a bit more work imo
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Old 28-07-08, 08:31 AM   #9
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thanks x ice and p2sta i will work on the materials
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Old 28-07-08, 09:33 AM   #10
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keep trying on the blue one and use some soft white "reflexions"/planes like in the last render.
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