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Old 14-10-08, 08:11 AM   #1
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Mercedes-Benz SL 2009

Hi people I hope you remember my previous work - mid-poly SL-Class. I gonna make hi-poly model of this beauty car also. I'm working on old mid-poly model and tweaking wire to make it to be as wire for hi-poly model. So here are some clays and wires. Hope you like it. If not - let me know your critics, I will take it into consideration.
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Old 14-10-08, 08:23 AM   #2
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looks good so far, maybe even those edges on the hood
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Old 14-10-08, 09:02 AM   #3
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nice to see you worknig on the car again good start imo, only check this areas
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Here we go Just make wire more equal
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Old 14-10-08, 09:53 AM   #5
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wow sm@rt! nice work! looks really nice.
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Old 14-10-08, 01:49 PM   #6
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Thanks Dave! Here is some progress
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Old 14-10-08, 01:55 PM   #7
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just one thing, check the wheel arch on the front bumper, its not fully round. is it supposed to be like that?
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Looks good modellingwise, but I think you need to check the accuracy on the grille, I think it's protruding too much from the bumper.
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Old 14-10-08, 04:50 PM   #9
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Nice job so far! You might want to check out some images on http://www.mbusa.com/mercedes/MBHome...&yr=2009&vc=SL
There are a few details you are missing. Like the front center of the bumper-it should have a hard edge in the middle. And your foglamp cutouts are at the wrong angles for a 2009. :-)
Keep up the good work!
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Old 14-10-08, 06:54 PM   #10
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nice to see something refreshing from you, smart it looks clean and well organised
how about a reflections test or something, coz yuo're an adept of the finish 100% a part first modeling technique. so those parts should be almost tottaly done.
the grille/nose it's too mocu outwards("extruded").
i'm forward watching this, keep up
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