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06-01-08, 12:38 PM | #1 |
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Citroen C4 (2 Door) 2006
While my Subaru is on render stage I've started new model.
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06-01-08, 01:26 PM | #2 |
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It looks really good, very good start!
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06-01-08, 04:23 PM | #3 |
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it's an ok start but it seems to be pinching around the headlight and the very bottom of the bumper.
regards, rodder
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06-01-08, 07:27 PM | #4 |
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alright, added a drawing. the headlight should be clear. the bumper just looks like it goes a bit inwards where it should not. not 100% i am right about that one but i know i'm right about the headlight.
regards, rodder
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07-01-08, 06:46 AM | #5 |
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Wow,this is cool car dude
Btw,its very good start |
07-01-08, 08:03 AM | #6 |
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hi, I like citroën C4, keep working, this can be good project as your previous', I think you have there some bumps that need to be fixed, but good work IMO
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07-01-08, 08:12 AM | #7 |
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very good work man. i think i saw some tris in one low poly picture but it looked ok in the same picture on highpoly.
how many hours you spent so far on this one ? |
07-01-08, 10:45 AM | #8 |
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everything looks pretty clean except this region its looks little bumpy to me..
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07-01-08, 11:48 AM | #9 |
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I can see room for improvment in almost all areas so far. I suggest you start creating the whole car in low res and then iterate on it, adding detail. I promise you'll get a better result when you're working with the "whole picture". You'll understand the design better, get smoother curves, a prettier mesh and a better end result.
Edit: I think that you are too stressed, moving too fast forward. Spend more time perfecting things and it'll show. /Claes Last edited by cwikdahl; 07-01-08 at 12:01 PM. |
07-01-08, 12:40 PM | #10 |
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tottaly agree with cwikdahl...
looking very good anyway, but why not to look better if it can be? __________________
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