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Old 04-12-07, 11:11 AM   #1
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Honda Civic Type-R 2007 sedan

Hello there.
This is my third car model started. Guess its the best place to post when making a car so here I give it a go.
I've been working on this car model for couple of days and this is what I've got so far.
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Of course comments and critique is always welcome here.
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Old 04-12-07, 12:25 PM   #2
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it's a nice start. here's my little tip on looking for bumps, always look at the farther side from the camera. that's what got you here. on the near side it looks perfect but on the far side you can see it's a bit off where the crease ends that runs by the headlights into the bumper.

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Old 04-12-07, 02:34 PM   #3
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Thanks for the tip Rodder. Indeed I need to pay attantion on that crease.
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Old 04-12-07, 03:11 PM   #4
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Looking very clean so far.
Keep it up!

I like the new attachment system.
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Old 05-12-07, 03:09 PM   #5
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Allright, spent some time on that crease. Guess it is a little bit better than before.
Nearly finished the front wing and added missing thickness to the pannels.
So, what do you think ?

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Old 05-12-07, 06:58 PM   #6
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I think you have done good work!!! God luck....
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Old 05-12-07, 08:25 PM   #7
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looks like a good nad clean job keep working
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Old 05-12-07, 10:44 PM   #8
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methinks that there are bumps on the side of the bumper where various shapes converge. you're making nice progress though.

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Old 05-12-07, 10:51 PM   #9
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not bad

this are seems to not clean........
also some of the fender edges seem to be bit to hard.

keep it up

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Old 05-12-07, 11:18 PM   #10
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Ohh Rodderworld guess that I misunderstood you earlier when talking about that nasty crease on the bumper which Lookdown11 pointed out too.
Thought you meant the way how that crease fade out in the end. Sorry about it if so. I'd like to say that bump is made on purpose.
Here have a look at one of my reference pictures:http://www.mugen-power.com/street/CI...e/wp4-1024.jpg


Lookdown11, I've just watched carefully my reference pictures and you are right,definitly I need to take care of that area near air intake.

Thanks for the attention to my project
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