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 06-01-08, 11:38 AM
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CGCars Member
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Transnistria, Tiraspol
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 Citroen C4 (2 Door) 2006
While my Subaru is on render stage I've started new model.
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06-01-08, 12:26 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Italy
Posts: 66
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It looks really good, very good start!
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06-01-08, 06:27 PM
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CGCars Moderator
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 3,998
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alright, added a drawing. the headlight should be clear. the bumper just looks like it goes a bit inwards where it should not. not 100% i am right about that one but i know i'm right about the headlight.
regards, rodder
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07-01-08, 05:46 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Malaysia
Posts: 86
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Wow,this is cool car dude
 Btw,its very good start |
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07-01-08, 07:03 AM
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CGCars Moderator
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Czech Republic
Posts: 2,612
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hi, I like citroën C4, keep working, this can be good project as your previous', I think you have there some bumps that need to be fixed, but good work IMO
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07-01-08, 07:12 AM
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CGCars Member
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Bucharest - Romania
Posts: 329
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very good work man. i think i saw some tris in one low poly picture but it looked ok in the same picture on highpoly.
how many hours you spent so far on this one ? |
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07-01-08, 09:45 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Zagreb, Croatia
Posts: 74
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everything looks pretty clean except this region its looks little bumpy to me..
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07-01-08, 10:48 AM
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CGCars Member
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Sthlm, Sweden
Posts: 185
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I can see room for improvment in almost all areas so far. I suggest you start creating the whole car in low res and then iterate on it, adding detail. I promise you'll get a better result when you're working with the "whole picture". You'll understand the design better, get smoother curves, a prettier mesh and a better end result.
Edit: I think that you are too stressed, moving too fast forward. Spend more time perfecting things and it'll show. /Claes Last edited by cwikdahl : 07-01-08 at 11:01 AM. |
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07-01-08, 11:40 AM
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CGCars SeniorMember
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Romania,Sibiu
Posts: 2,621
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tottaly agree with cwikdahl...
looking very good anyway, but why not to look better if it can be? __________________
Parerea mea si a multor oameni de stiinta... |
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